Louis Vuitton

Thursday, 5 February 2015

Week 4





Kampung Chegar Galah
33500 Sauk,Perak

15 January 2015

No 41 Jalan Permas Jaya,
81750 Johor Bahru Malaysia

Dear Sir/Madam

Application For the Post of an  Computer Technician

I am writing this letter in response to your advertisement of an opening in  Computer Technician division that published in Job Star. I believe that this position is suitable to my interest and my skill sets. I intend to apply as Service Technician in your company.

I am currently completing my training in Computer Engineering (Networking) Certificate at Institut Kemahiran Mara Lumut and have learn really situation in Industrial Practical .I am a very dedicated worker and a fast learner. I have also experience in  Microsoft Word,Excel,Power Point,Acess,Adobe Photoshope,Movie Maker.Therefore, given the opportunity and proper guidance, I am positive that i will be able to contribute towards the success of your company.

Enclosed are my resume and certificates that include my qualifications and experience for your review. I would appreciate the opportunity to further discuss my interest in your company and meet you in an interview.

Yours faithfully

 Adnin

MUHAMMAD ADNIN BIN ROSMAN




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  2. The title is not underline and Yours faithfully must be Yours Faithfully

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  3. hello young millionaire...try you see you faithfully...please improve you latter f...

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  4. Address: Who are you sending it to?? Is the building the receiver??
    Title: Please Underline as you didn't bold it.
    Content: Sentence structure error. Please Check.
    Overview: Good just justify and review for errors.

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  5. at the end of your Yours faitfully u have put in comma

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  6. Sorry to say but your letter is good

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  7. insert comma at your "yours faithfully"

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  9. hi kuale!!! your title must be all in capital letter

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  10. Good! but the receiver address doesn't have the company name :)

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  11. Please don't do simple mistake like put (,) and bold title....

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  12. Good one .. thumbs up for you ..

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  13. subject line : Application for the Post of a Computer Technician not Application for the Post of an Computer Technician. You must have the company name and to whom you are writing this letter, e.g The Human Resource Manager. Overall, keep up the good work!

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  14. The tittle must be all in upper case because you did not underline the subject.
    Yours Faithfully , .....
    AWESOME BKE !!!!!

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  15. assalamualaikum marquis adnin hahaha...nice letter you have here...but you have forgot to put coma on your letter..check it up..nice one boss :) :*

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