Kampung Chegar Galah
33500 Sauk,Perak
15 January 2015
No 41 Jalan Permas Jaya,
81750 Johor Bahru Malaysia
Dear Sir/Madam
Application For the Post of
an Computer Technician
I am writing this letter in response to your advertisement of an
opening in Computer Technician division
that published in Job Star. I believe that this position is suitable to my
interest and my skill sets. I intend to apply as Service Technician in your
company.
I am currently completing my training in Computer Engineering (Networking)
Certificate at Institut Kemahiran Mara Lumut and have learn really situation in
Industrial Practical .I am a very dedicated worker and a fast learner. I have
also experience in Microsoft
Word,Excel,Power Point,Acess,Adobe Photoshope,Movie Maker.Therefore, given the
opportunity and proper guidance, I am positive that i will be able to
contribute towards the success of your company.
Enclosed are my resume and certificates that include my qualifications
and experience for your review. I would appreciate the opportunity to further
discuss my interest in your company and meet you in an interview.
Yours faithfully
Adnin
MUHAMMAD ADNIN BIN ROSMAN
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ReplyDeleteThe title is not underline and Yours faithfully must be Yours Faithfully
ReplyDeletehello young millionaire...try you see you faithfully...please improve you latter f...
ReplyDeleteAddress: Who are you sending it to?? Is the building the receiver??
ReplyDeleteTitle: Please Underline as you didn't bold it.
Content: Sentence structure error. Please Check.
Overview: Good just justify and review for errors.
at the end of your Yours faitfully u have put in comma
ReplyDeleteSorry to say but your letter is good
ReplyDeleteinsert comma at your "yours faithfully"
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Deletebro...your letter is good..
ReplyDeletehi kuale!!! your title must be all in capital letter
ReplyDeleteGood! but the receiver address doesn't have the company name :)
ReplyDeletePlease don't do simple mistake like put (,) and bold title....
ReplyDeleteGood one .. thumbs up for you ..
ReplyDeletesubject line : Application for the Post of a Computer Technician not Application for the Post of an Computer Technician. You must have the company name and to whom you are writing this letter, e.g The Human Resource Manager. Overall, keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteThe tittle must be all in upper case because you did not underline the subject.
ReplyDeleteYours Faithfully , .....
AWESOME BKE !!!!!
assalamualaikum marquis adnin hahaha...nice letter you have here...but you have forgot to put coma on your letter..check it up..nice one boss :) :*
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